{"content":"\n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Z666ful<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 196 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed February 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Z666ful<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-03-15T16:28:23+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div>HAHAHAH FINISH!!!damn this is awesome. I FEEL GREAT. like just take a huge dump....___.DA : http:\/\/fav.me\/d5y3xbo<\/a>edited.<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Hanya bisa tersenyum<\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n _koinuri<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 451 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed June 2012<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n _koinuri<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-03-15T17:46:20+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Everyone here is so good!Messy rough draft. Somebody tell me anything that's wrong with this picture (other than the lines looking messy :\/) I want to improve.<\/span>Azusa from Dracu-riot and Shizuru from Rewrite<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/a><\/center><\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Bweh<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 486 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed September 2012<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Bweh<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-03-15T18:43:25+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n The lines looks messy<\/del>Proportions, limbs (arms, legs) are composed of two main parts, ed by a knee or elbow. In any case these parts should be equal in length to each other. Typically half of an arm's length equals a head, though that only applies to grown men\/women. In teenagers and children it's somewhat shorter, and in lolis\/chibis it's dramatically shorter than that. Anyway in your pic Shizuru's (I think that's her, I haven't played either galge) forearm is too long. Since it's necessary that she keep her hand on that patch, just have her raised at a higher angle, while shortening the forearm.Azusa is fine, although the top of her head is too... High.Keep drawing pls<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n _koinuri<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 451 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed June 2012<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n _koinuri<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-03-15T19:29:11+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Brian OA wrote:<\/h4>The lines looks messy<\/del>Proportions, limbs (arms, legs) are composed of two main parts, ed by a knee or elbow. In any case these parts should be equal in length to each other. Typically half of an arm's length equals a head, though that only applies to grown men\/women. In teenagers and children it's somewhat shorter, and in lolis\/chibis it's dramatically shorter than that. Anyway in your pic Shizuru's (I think that's her, I haven't played either galge) forearm is too long. Since it's necessary that she keep her hand on that patch, just have her raised at a higher angle, while shortening the forearm.Azusa is fine, although the top of her head is too... High.Keep drawing pls<\/blockquote>Thanks for the tips! I'll try to apply them for the line art.So the head is high again. I always have that problem..I think you got the character mixed up<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/a><\/center><\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Bweh<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 486 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed September 2012<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Bweh<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-03-15T22:50:47+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n I don't knowLeft's head's too tall, right's arm is too long<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n LightoHK<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 512 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed September 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n LightoHK<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-03-16T03:23:13+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Z666ful wrote:<\/h4><\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div>HAHAHAH FINISH!!!damn this is awesome. I FEEL GREAT. like just take a huge dump...<\/blockquote>Awesome! <3 WIP: <\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/center>Depende<\/strong><\/center><\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Magihoenix<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,142 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed April 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Magihoenix<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-03-16T22:26:10+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Some pencil-work <\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div>And here is pencil + red colored pencil\/copic<\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Z666ful<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 196 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed February 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Z666ful<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-03-17T17:21:37+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div>finished, my first attempt using SAI.DA: http:\/\/fav.me\/d5yc3f5<\/a><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Hanya bisa tersenyum<\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Aoriki<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 778 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed February 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Aoriki<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-03-17T17:23:01+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Z666ful wrote:<\/h4><\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div>finished, my first attempt using SAI.<\/blockquote>Oh my....that's so cute.<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/a>x<\/span><\/span><\/span>^ Click for Tumblr<\/center><\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n LightoHK<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 512 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n 2z6n4