[Normal]

00:18:456 (2) -It piles it 00:18:702 (3) - .
01:03:948 (1) - add a finish
01:07:882 (2) - It piles it 01:08:128 (3) - or 01:08:128 (3) - It piles it 01:08:620 (4) -
01:23:128 - this kiai time Please enlarge it imo?
02:50:915 (3) - new combo
02:51:407 (1) - remove new combo
02:52:882 (1) - new combo

[Hard]

00:44:522 (4) - new combo
01:23:128 - this kiai time Please enlarge it imo?


good map!

+Star

[General]
1) delete the .osb file and full submission
2) the picture "60716" is useless? If yes, delete it and full submission


[Normal]
lack of hitsound
start a hitobject at blue tick is not suitable for [Normal]
00:25:866 (x) add a note?
00:33:250 (1,2) they don't look good since they were covered by the slider
00:36:135 (4) start at 00:36:020 and end at 00:36:481
00:36:943 (x) add a note ?
00:56:443 (2) move it to the next white tick ( 00:56:558)
01:00:135 (2) ^
01:08:443 (3) ^

[Hard]
lack of hitsound
00:34:404 (1,2) covered by the slider, don't look good.
00:36:250 (1,2) ^
00:41:789 (2) ^
01:09:366 (6) start at 01:09:250
01:11:097 (x) add a note?
01:23:097 (x) ^
01:24:135 (5) better to slience the slidertick
01:28:750 (2) change this slider to a circle?

[Teras's Insane]
fine~

Get my star~

roflninja wrote: 493d2i

vincerio wrote: 3b6p8

[Overall]
file size ~22mb for TV Size ?(~1.30 mins) i think it's too much!

TAG : japanese anime Navel Teras

I kow the size is a bit big, im working on a way to shrink it

Uhm, as I said, remove the audio~

General
- I saw a .osb file even I have already re- again D: ...
- Add kiai in first two diffs?
- Stack Leniency should be the same on all difficuties o.o

Normal
00:36:020 (4) - resnap problem here? finish this at red tick (00:36:481)
01:08:558 (3) - spacing problem
00:38:097 (4,5) - overlap these notes, looks better
01:19:173 (1) - no new combo? since you didn't do this before

Hard
- HP Drain - 1~2
00:32:558 (11) - doesn't look good, overlap or what?
00:41:789 (2) - hidden notes? don't do that Q_Q
01:09:250 (6) - finish at white tick

Teras's
- Tags..o.o a bit different from others?
00:18:943 (x) - add a note here sounds better o.o
00:29:789 (9) - replace whistle
01:16:866 (1) - delete new combo


others are fine:D star for you

•Diffs•
I think "Teras's Insane" should be "Teras' Insane".

•Overall•
What do you think about changing combo colours?

•Teras's Insane•
00:31:635 (8) - New combo.
01:19:173 (1) - 1 grid up?

•Hard•
00:35:097 (1,2) - 1 grid left?

Seriously, I think that roflninja's diffs should have a lot of changements. If It's your first map, keep it but have some improvements.

Star~

Fixed most of the changes and fixed the name. Seems like I missed that one. Thanks for noticing Kecco.


So here's the update. Delete the other one. ^^

: Yuria - You (TV Size) (roflninja) [Teras' Insane].osu

All mods done, thank you for the time

@Sekuyi

if you have a program to strip the audio lemme know cause ones i have wont do it

As I said. Add the new diff I gave you that had the name change. And delete Teras's Insane
Because the old version is till there. ^^

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
i love this song= =, good luck.
you have an unused .osb file, delete it and re full-submit
when you want hitsound on a slider's all beats, don't just choose the slider and select hitsound, it will change the sliderslide sound, choose every beat to add hitsounds plz. this problem happens many times. example:00:26:789 (4) @ [Normal]
[Normal] and [Hard] needs same kiai time as [Teras'Insane]
offset: about +5
you use too many circles in your own diff= =, try to use more sliders.

[Normal]
slider tick rate:1
00:26:097 (2,3,4) - it's hard for players to read 3/4 beat at the very beginning, maybe you should use a slider instead of 2&3&4's start, and a circle instead of 4's end.
00:42:712 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1 grid down?
00:50:097 (1) - 1 grid left to stack with (2)
01:07:173 (1) - turn off "grid snap" and make it stack with (5)'s end.

[Hard]
00:53:904 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ...don't think you need these new combos.
01:28:058 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^

[Teras' Insane]
00:02:097 (1) - nazi. 1 grid down.
00:26:443 (2) - whistle at the start.
00:30:943 (5) - whistle
00:38:327 (8) - ^
00:38:789 (1) - whistle at the end.
01:09:366 (9) - stack with (8)'s end?
01:11:558 (5) - why not at the symmetrical place with (1)? 3 grid up.
01:18:250 (1,2,3,4,5) - spam finish is stupid.
01:21:943 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:25:635 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

NatsumeRin wrote: 534w41

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[Teras' Insane]
00:02:097 (1) - nazi. 1 grid down. Fixed Nazi grid.
00:26:443 (2) - whistle at the start. Done.
00:30:943 (5) - whistle Done.
00:38:327 (8) - ^ ^
00:38:789 (1) - whistle at the end. Done.
01:09:366 (9) - stack with (8)'s end? I like how it looks at the moment. So I won't do this. ^^
01:11:558 (5) - why not at the symmetrical place with (1)? 3 grid up. Done.
01:18:250 (1,2,3,4,5) - spam finish is stupid. Hmpff. Remove finish from (1)
01:21:943 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
01:25:635 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^

Thanks for your mod. ^^

: Yuria - You (TV Size) (roflninja) [Teras' Insane].osu

someone help me!!! roflninja is forcing me to star him by a gun to the head!!!!
jk...

i'll mod this later

here you go with the vid: http://www.mediafire.com/?tjozjgoenzf
I am using "Any Video Converter" for that. Also, this thread could be interesting for you: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=639

Hi

[General]
1) Please full submit again, because I have 2 diff when I already
2) The begin of song is not same on each diff, [Teras' Insane] is begin at 00:02:097, but why other diff is start at 00:25:866? Please map from 00:02:097

[Normal]
I think the object place in red tick might be confuse for beginner player.... Fix this

00:33:943 (3) - Mix it up with whistle and clap, doesn't looks good, remove whistle or clap?
01:13:173 (5) - New combo?

[Hard]
01:03:481 (1,2,3) - Move 1 grid down?
01:07:173 (1,2,3) - ^
01:18:250 (1) - Move 1 grid up?

[Teras' Insane]
Fine~

Good song
STAR

Good morning! It's really almost afternoon here... But whatever, it's morning for me.

Here's some stuff I found while going through it quickly.

General

1. Do a full submit. I only get Normal and Hard .

Normal
It's ok with notes on red ticks for normal IMO. However, avoid blue ticks as much as possible.
01:02:097 (4,5,6,7) - This pattern bothers me. Maybe you should convert it into sliders due to confusion and blue ticks.

[Hard]
00:26:327 (x) Maybe add a note here and stack it with what's currently (3).
00:31:404 (7) - New combo
00:53:789 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - If you look closesly, this stream has inconsistent spacing
01:28:289 (4) - Too far from (3), no?

Your preview point time is different in Normal and Hard. Please set the same value on every difficulty.

[Hard]

00:53:789 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The spacing in this stream is inconsistent. Please align the notes manually with Distance Snap turned off.
01:10:404 (1,2) - This double sound odd. Move it 1/4 back or just transform it into a single note.

I don't see the Teras difficulty. You need to do the full submission to get it back.

not bad, +star

[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
00:50:097 (6) - add new combo
01:28:289 (4) - distance check

[Teras' Insane]
fine

Must
Should
Suggestion

[Normal]
Clear. All good. May be add custom colours?

[Hard]
00:31:404 - new combo
00:49:866 - ^
00:58:404 - ^
01:04:404 - distance
01:09:020 - move to another place
01:10:866 - remove new combo
01:23:789 - distance
01:28:750 - finish

[Insane]
00:01:635 - starting from here add some notes
00:22:404 - new combo
00:46:404 - ^
00:51:250 - ^
00:53:789 - place this notes with simetry :3
01:19:173 - new combo
01:26:212 - short break must be removed. Place here spinner (auto bonus is about 5000p)

Star ;; )

Well, just little suggestions
If you don't like, ignore~

[Normal]
00:48:712 (2,3,4) - I don't like the 3 finish patterns :/, (2) Whistle; (3) nothing; (4) whistle
00:50:097 (1,2) - stack with 00:49:520 (4)

[Hard]
00:46:404 (1) - I don't like finish. Maybe, Whistle in the begin and in the end

[Teras' Insane]
00:47:789 (1,2,3,4) - buh spam finish ;.;
01:18:366 (2,3,4) - ^
01:22:058 (2,3,4) - ^
01:25:750 (2,3,4) - ^

Good luck~ :>
Star~

Louis Cyphre wrote: y601t

[Insane]
00:01:635 - starting from here add some notes Kay. Added more notes
00:22:404 - new combo
00:46:404 - ^ Nah, I prefer it like it is now.
00:51:250 - ^ [color=#0000FF]Added new combo at (9) instead. [/color]
[/color]00:53:789 - place this notes with simetry :3 Placed them in another way. Feel free to recheck.
01:19:173 - new combo Done.
01:26:212 - short break must be removed. Place here spinner (auto bonus is about 5000p) Hmm. Added the spinner then. But it sounds strange to me. So I might do some other changes later.

Star ;; )

Thanks for your mod. ^^

scar1410 wrote: 1p344s

Well, just little suggestions
If you don't like, ignore~

[Normal]
00:48:712 (2,3,4) - I don't like the 3 finish patterns :/, (2) Whistle; (3) nothing; (4) whistle
00:50:097 (1,2) - stack with 00:49:520 (4)

[Hard]
00:46:404 (1) - I don't like finish. Maybe, Whistle in the begin and in the end

[Teras' Insane]
00:47:789 (1,2,3,4) - buh spam finish ;.; I like how it sounds here. I won't do anything about it.
01:18:366 (2,3,4) - ^ Removed one more finish. It should be better now.
01:22:058 (2,3,4) - ^^
01:25:750 (2,3,4) - ^^

Good luck~ :>
Star~

Thanks ~

roflninja, feel free to rename my diff to [Teras' Hard]. As I don't find it being that insane. I bet someone will ask you to do that eventually anyways. But just update this first though~

: Yuria - You (TV Size) (roflninja) [Teras' Insane].osu

Lets see....
A very new mapper feeling xD
I don't think countdown fits too well on this song
I am unsure about the timing... it sounds like the vocal is earlier than the music D:

Normal-
00:25:866 (1) - I say remove this, starting on a 1/2 vocal that's not very clear feels kinda unsettling
00:26:097 (1,2,3,1) - hmm.. this part sounds the same as 00:29:789 (2,3,4), 00:33:481 (2,3,4) and so on... yet only this part follows vocal more and uses 1/4? stick with 1/2 please... or actually 1/1?
00:42:712 (1) - hmm, if you're matching vocal, extend this by 1/4... if not, then snap the repeat to 1/1
@.@ the hitsounds are basic... they don't sound -bad- though

Hard-
The overall difficulty could be adjusted a bit, but its fine...
00:30:250 (3) - following how you were mapping this, shift this back a 1/4 beat
01:24:135 (5) - start this on the red tick (then extend by 1/4) (compare this to 01:09:250 (6))
01:28:289 (4) - spacing? (or why is it hanging out like this)
I think Normal and Hard should match Insane's kiai

Teras'- Add a tiny bit of lead-in time please
00:01:635 (1,2) - what, a jump right off the bat?
00:15:020 - shift timing before note
00:40:635 (4) - nazi down a tick, make this a straight line
00:43:866 - hmm add note to match 00:42:020 (3)? or remove 42:020? xD
00:43:981 (6) - ^ if you did add a note, add clap to match too
00:56:558 (2) - I was more expecting this to be a 1/4 note following vocal, but its fine ><
01:14:558 (1,2,3,4) - ... make these the same amount of notes and slider length as 01:18:250 (1,2,3,4,5) and 01:21:943 (1,2,3,4,5)? (though I kinda think you should remove the clap on this stream)
Fair

There's one part of the video that seems almost... not allowed... mmm
@.@ have someone check timing...?

For the moment, i'll leave a star, tell me by forum pm after you fix Shinxyn's mod.

Shinxyn wrote: 15n4d

Lets see....
A very new mapper feeling xD
I don't think countdown fits too well on this song
I am unsure about the timing... it sounds like the vocal is earlier than the music D:



Teras'- Add a tiny bit of lead-in time please Added.
00:01:635 (1,2) - what, a jump right off the bat? Wopps. Must have done that by mistake XD
00:15:020 - shift timing before note Done ~
00:40:635 (4) - nazi down a tick, make this a straight line Fixed Nazi grid.
00:43:866 - hmm add note to match 00:42:020 (3)? or remove 42:020? xD Added a note.
00:43:981 (6) - ^ if you did add a note, add clap to match too ^
00:56:558 (2) - I was more expecting this to be a 1/4 note following vocal, but its fine >< I added one more note so it follows the vocal.
01:14:558 (1,2,3,4) - ... make these the same amount of notes and slider length as 01:18:250 (1,2,3,4,5) and 01:21:943 (1,2,3,4,5)? (though I kinda think you should remove the clap on this stream) Done ~
Fair

There's one part of the video that seems almost... not allowed... mmm
@.@ have someone check timing...? I checked the timing before I asked to guest map this. And it looked fine to me. Same goes with the offset O.o I'm not an expert. But I'm sure this timing is correct.

Thanks for your mod Shinx

: Yuria - You (TV Size) (roflninja) [Teras' Insane].osu

Request Accepted


good map
STAR!

Now's the time to give away the star~ * ^^
Nice work!

Hello roflninja.

[Normal]
00:42:712 (1) - I don't like this.Maybe remove and add 2 sliders? [00:42:712 - 00:43:173,or probably adding a reverse-slider with 00:42:943 between those notes] and [00:43:635-00:44:097]
00:50:097 (1) - ^
01:23:789 (1) - Maybe you could silence the spinner?

[Hard]
00:51:712 (6) - New combo?
01:22:866 (1) - Remoe new combo?
01:23:789 (4) - New combo?
01:24:020 - Add a circle here.

[Teras' Insane]
Fine,but why there's no video in this difficulty?

Good luck,star~

Hello~

General
- Add kiai in 00:56:558 (Normal, Hard)

Normal
01:01:173 (2) - No Clap
01:04:866 (3) - ^
01:12:250 (3) - ^
01:15:943 (3) - ^
01:19:635 (3) - ^
01:20:904 (6) - ^
01:03:020 (5) - Align to the end of (4)
01:11:789 (2) - 1 Grid up.. or something (distance error)
01:23:789 (1) - End at 01:25:635

Hard
Good, but it will be better if you fix in here about the Claps as the same I mentioned in [Normal]

Teras Insane
- Decrease Overall difficulty.. or nvm~

Good map~~
Star

Insane

Notes shouldn't go before the first offset
remove Countdown
move Lead-in to 1000ms ...lol

Hard

on some parts have many sound clap...

Normal

fine~

sonnyc wrote: 4c3n6u

Hello~



Teras Insane
- Decrease Overall difficulty.. or nvm~ It becomes so slow if I lower it. I prefer when it's like this

Good map~~
Star

AngelHoney wrote: 4w2c5d

Insane

Notes shouldn't go before the first offset They aren't....Look at my offset tbh.
remove Countdown I don't have any countdown...-.-
move Lead-in to 1000ms ...lolIt's on that already....

Hard

on some parts have many sound clap...

Normal

fine~

There you go

: Yuria - You (TV Size) (roflninja) [Teras' Insane].osu

Thanks for the mods

[Normal]
00:33:019 (5) - add bit with finish.
00:42:711 (1) - finish in end.
00:46:404 (6) - right 1, use grid lvl 3.
00:47:788 (7) - add bit with finish.
01:21:943 (1) - that slider have end on white tick, also add finish in end.
01:22:866 (2) - ^
01:23:788 (1) - spinner have end in 01:26:096 and add finish.

[Hard]
00:30:481 (4,5,6) - not correct spacing, you must trying fix all like that. (that nazi)
00:47:788 (2) - add bit with finish.
00:53:558 - add timing section with normal hitsounds.
00:54:711 - add timing section with soft hitsounds.
00:56:097 (1) - deleted that slider.
00:54:942 - add spinner with finish, end in 00:56:558.
01:25:635 (4) - add bit with finish.

[Tera's insane]
Overall difficulty -1.
00:32:904 (6) - finish.
00:36:481 (7) - remove whistle and add finish.
00:38:327 (8) - ^
00:43:981 (6) - clap.
00:46:635 (6) - ^
00:47:096 (9) - ^
00:50:096 (4) - ^
00:53:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - bad, you must remake that, not good for play.

Star~

[DBF] wrote: 3t1y5h

[Tera's insane]

Overall difficulty -1. I will not do this. I like it how it is now.
00:32:904 (6) - finish. Won't do this.
00:36:481 (7) - remove whistle and add finish. ^
00:38:327 (8) - ^^
00:43:981 (6) - clap. ^
00:46:635 (6) - ^ Added.
00:47:096 (9) - ^^
00:50:096 (4) - ^ ^
00:53:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - bad, you must remake that, not good for play. Kay..changed. Last time I change this part. So next person to ask me to change can just skip doing that. Because I will not. It's so easy now anyways.. <.<

Star~

Thanks for mod!

: Yuria - You (TV Size) (roflninja) [Teras' Insane].osu

[Teras' Insane]
Why no video in this DIFF?

all fine :3

star!

Overall:
The map is fine,but soft-clap is really not suitable for this song imo.
Take a look at the hitsound of [Teras' Insane] as reference.
Meanwhile,PreviewTime on [Hard] is different from others
pls unite them.

[Teras' Insane]
01:23:442 (4) - remove clap
01:23:788 (1) - add clap
01:24:250 (1) - remove clap and add finish

Star!

[Normal]
00:26:097 (1,2,3) - Make it a silder that repeats on 00:26:442 and add a beat on 00:27:250?
00:42:135 (4) - Considering this is a normal, moving the beat 1/4 back to the white tick would make it easier to hit for those that are not as good in osu.
00:45:827 (5) - ^
00:49:520 (4) - ^
00:49:520 (4) - ^
01:07:173 (1) - ^, make it end 1/4 later.
01:10:866 (1) - ^, make it end 1/4 later.
01:13:635 (6) - ^
01:14:558 (1) - ^, make it end 1/4 later.
01:17:211 (6) - ^
01:18:250 (1) - ^, make it end 1/4 later.
01:20:558 (5,6,7) - Turn this into a silder that repeats once on 01:20:904.


[Hard]
00:45:020 (3) - Hard to see due to it being overlapped by 00:44:558 (2). Move it away.


[Insane]
Nice mapping.
00:01:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,1) - Lower the silder velocity/half the BPM? Feels too fast to the song.
00:40:173 (1) - Feels kinda , with the almost-silent hitsounds and it being linked to nothing.

gdeath wrote: 5d3i47

Overall:
The map is fine,but soft-clap is really not suitable for this song imo.
Take a look at the hitsound of [Teras' Insane] as reference.
Meanwhile,PreviewTime on [Hard] is different from others
pls unite them.

[Teras' Insane]
01:23:442 (4) - remove clap Done.
01:23:788 (1) - add clap^
01:24:250 (1) - remove clap and add finish ^

Star!

Thanks for your mod!

: Yuria - You (TV Size) (roflninja) [Teras' Insane].osu

JInxyjem wrote: 14w2r

[Normal]
00:26:097 (1,2,3) - Make it a silder that repeats on 00:26:442 and add a beat on 00:27:250?
00:42:135 (4) - Considering this is a normal, moving the beat 1/4 back to the white tick would make it easier to hit for those that are not as good in osu.
00:45:827 (5) - ^
00:49:520 (4) - ^
00:49:520 (4) - ^
01:07:173 (1) - ^, make it end 1/4 later.
01:10:866 (1) - ^, make it end 1/4 later.
01:13:635 (6) - ^
01:14:558 (1) - ^, make it end 1/4 later.
01:17:211 (6) - ^
01:18:250 (1) - ^, make it end 1/4 later.
01:20:558 (5,6,7) - Turn this into a silder that repeats once on 01:20:904.


[Hard]
00:45:020 (3) - Hard to see due to it being overlapped by 00:44:558 (2). Move it away.


[Insane]
Nice mapping.
00:01:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,1) - Lower the silder velocity/half the BPM? Feels too fast to the song. Nah, I don't think it's too fast ^^
00:40:173 (1) - Feels kinda , with the almost-silent hitsounds and it being linked to nothing.Won't change this. I hate loud normal Hitsounds :-/

Hai here comes your mod~

[Overall]
Everythings all fine and dandy, except for the fact that you don't have a difficulty under 3 stars. Someone ate your easy difficulty.

[Normal]
Fine.

[Hard]
Mmmh... This is okay.

[Teras' Insane]
Teras, wasn't I just talking about this difficulty to you the other day?
I shall post what I said about this difficulty.
I don't particularly like your HP Drain, feel like it needs to be lowered one tick.
OD is fine, I like where it is right now.
00:54:596 (7) - That cursed note, I STILL feel like it should be stacked with 5,6. I know you're going to say no though.

You need an easy.
*throws a star at you*
There you go~

I_Tatsuo_I wrote: 724t1g

Hai here comes your mod~

[Overall]
Everythings all fine and dandy, except for the fact that you don't have a difficulty under 3 stars. Someone ate your easy difficulty. Normal has 2.81 stars. No need for an easier diff.

[Normal]
Fine.

[Hard]
Mmmh... This is okay.

[Teras' Insane]
Teras, wasn't I just talking about this difficulty to you the other day?
I shall post what I said about this difficulty.
I don't particularly like your HP Drain, feel like it needs to be lowered one tick.
OD is fine, I like where it is right now.
00:54:596 (7) - That cursed note, I STILL feel like it should be stacked with 5,6. I know you're going to say no though. It will still be a no xD

You need an easy.
*throws a star at you*
There you go~

Requested by Teras

[Tags]
Just curious, does Navel have anything to do with this map? If not, remove it.

[All difficulites]
I would say that you should only use claps every second white tick for the most part, The claps placement feels pretty odd right now and i think that fits the song the best.

[Normal]

00:26:097 (1,2,3) - Why not make this the same rhythm as 00:33:250 (1,2,3,4,5)
00:42:135 (4) - Okey, I know this follows the vocals but I think moving this 1/4 later makes it far more fun and playable. (Especial for being a Normal)
00:45:827 (5) - ^
00:49:520 (4) - ^
01:13:520 (6) - ^
01:17:212 (6) - ^

[Hard]
00:54:942 (1) - Add finish on this spinner


[Teras]
Not that found of the high HP drain but it might be just me.
Wish you added a bit more hitsounds, mainly in the beginning
00:43:981 (6,7) - Move back 1/4 on the time line.

*star*

Xgor wrote: 3x2l1w

[Teras]
Not that found of the high HP drain but it might be just me. It's now you and I_Tatsuo_I.
Wish you added a bit more hitsounds, mainly in the beginning I don't think I need more hitsounds. <.<
00:43:981 (6,7) - Move back 1/4 on the time line. Nah, it sounds horrible to me

Nothing changed. Thanks for your mod though

*star*

[Tags]
Just curious, does Navel have anything to do with this map? If not, remove it.Navel is the producer/company who made the h-game shuffle! was based off

[All difficulites]
I would say that you should only use claps every second white tick for the most part, The claps placement feels pretty odd right now and i think that fits the song the best.will leave this how it is for now, will take a look later

[Normal]

00:26:097 (1,2,3) - Why not make this the same rhythm as 00:33:250 (1,2,3,4,5) done
00:42:135 (4) - Okey, I know this follows the vocals but I think moving this 1/4 later makes it far more fun and playable. (Especial for being a Normal)^
00:45:827 (5) - ^ ^
00:49:520 (4) - ^ ^
01:13:520 (6) - ^ ^
01:17:212 (6) - ^ ^

[Hard]
00:54:942 (1) - Add finish on this spinner done

Hi hi!!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!

~Normal~
00:42:250 (4) - Fix Spacing.
01:03:365 (6) - Move 1/4 later (white tick) and New Combo.

~Hard~
00:51:943 (2) - Extend to the white tick, it sounds better imo.

~Tera's Insane~
- Just a little thing, Tags in here are "Teras Navel" when in the rest of diffs are "Navel Teras". Not a big deal but it might affect online tags

00:18:942 (7) - Fix Spacing.

Nice map :3 *star*

Beuchi-chan wrote: 1y1f14

~Tera's Insane~
- Just a little thing, Tags in here are "Teras Navel" when in the rest of diffs are "Navel Teras". Not a big deal but it might affect online tags

00:18:942 (7) - Fix Spacing.

Fixed both ;-)

Nice map :3 *star*

: Yuria - You (TV Size) (roflninja) [Teras' Insane].osu

'Aight then~

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these

1. Timing seems about right

[NORMAL]

The layout of the beats are a little dull, since most of the beats are all in straight lines and on right angles, There isn't anything technically wrong though. You could consider experimenting more with patterns that you put your beats in in your next map. It'll make it much more interesting.

[HARD]

Looks much more interesting than Normal, which is a good sign.

01:09:250 (6) - Perhaps you could move this 1/4 forward? (and make it 1/4 shorter if you do this). It follow the lyrics better that way to me.

[TERA'S INSANE]

00:54:596 (8) - Perhaps you could stack this on (7) to make a 3 beat stack?. It seems more intuitive that way.

Apart from the seemingly random jumps you've put in (like at 01:16:635 or 00:03:250), I quite like this map. The jumps themselves aren't that bad anyway, so the map stays fun. Nice work

Overall, its a pretty nice mapset. You could probably try experimenting with the layout of your beats a bit more in your next map. For a first map, you did a good job.

Starred

Doomsday93 wrote: 153q4a

[TERA'S INSANE]

00:54:596 (8) - Perhaps you could stack this on (7) to make a 3 beat stack?. It seems more intuitive that way. Kay, fixed it then.

Apart from the seemingly random jumps you've put in (like at 01:16:635 or 00:03:250), I quite like this map. The jumps themselves aren't that bad anyway, so the map stays fun. Nice work I like those random jumps

Starred

: Yuria - You (TV Size) (roflninja) [Teras' Insane].osu

Doomsday93 wrote: 153q4a

'Aight then~

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these

1. Timing seems about right

[NORMAL]

The layout of the beats are a little dull, since most of the beats are all in straight lines and on right angles, There isn't anything technically wrong though. You could consider experimenting more with patterns that you put your beats in in your next map. It'll make it much more interesting. will try next time, this is my first map so its kinda =/

[HARD]

Looks much more interesting than Normal, which is a good sign.

01:09:250 (6) - Perhaps you could move this 1/4 forward? (and make it 1/4 shorter if you do this). It follow the lyrics better that way to me.agree with you there

Thanks for the mod

sorry, i've become a bit lazy over the past few days orz

will mod in the weekend. star for now!

(Assuming I didn't see naked girls holding hands in the video)
Bubbled!

Hi. All suggestion

[Overall]
Change colours of circle like these 4
R(238) G(17) B(117)
R(128) G(64) B(64)
R(179) G(132) B(170)
R(255) G(150) B(0)
It will be more suitable for girls on BG

[Normal, Hard]
Actually, its clap sounds are somewhat annoying. I suggest all of claps should be changed to whistle except kiai time. and use normal hitsounds in kiai time. of course, you should control the volume when use it.

[Teras' Insane]
00:04:865 (3) - add whistle
00:07:519 (3) - ^
00:08:442 (2) - ^
00:18:365 - add circle to emphasize the beginning of song.
01:18:250 (1,2,3,4,5) - reverse or do something. similar to 01:14:558
00:26:211~00:40:058 - volume is too low

yehl wrote: 26xt

[Teras' Insane]
00:04:865 (3) - add whistle
00:07:519 (3) - ^
00:08:442 (2) - ^
00:18:365 - add circle to emphasize the beginning of song.
01:18:250 (1,2,3,4,5) - reverse or do something. similar to 01:14:558
00:26:211~00:40:058 - volume is too low

No to all. I prefer how it is now

Bubbled, so I better skip lol

Good luck!

Oh, Bubbled.

my mod

Nice map~
star & gl

banvi wrote: 4q3o2v

Oh, Bubbled.

my mod

00:27:481 (4) 1 grid down? (bacause spacing a bit far)
00:54:250 (5) 1 grid left?(^)
00:58:404 (5) 1 grid up?(^)
01:08:096 (3) 1 grid right?
01:16:173 (4) 1 grid up?

I don't like Nazi mods. COme up with something else if you want me to change anything <.<

Nice map~
star & gl

Hmm...everything is pretty solid in this map, methinks~

Except for one aspect...Er...in the video, there's some crazy nipple footage there... I think it would be best if you can find some way to remove it. I tried to remove it by adding a white overlay via video, but all that did was up the size by a giant amount. XD

But I guess you can add a white overlay on that part using SB a la http://osu-ppy-sh.zoneani.me/s/10359 . :S

Sorry about being picky on this.

Starrodkirby86 wrote: 6pu1b

Hmm...everything is pretty solid in this map, methinks~

Except for one aspect...Er...in the video, there's some crazy nipple footage there... I think it would be best if you can find some way to remove it. I tried to remove it by adding a white overlay via video, but all that did was up the size by a giant amount. XD

But I guess you can add a white overlay on that part using SB a la http://osu-ppy-sh.zoneani.me/s/10359 . :S

Sorry about being picky on this.

Was only a matter of time until someone made me fix that
should be fine now, hope the SB works

I laughed my head off when I saw the SB. XD

Teras wrote: 246r3g

I laughed my head off when I saw the SB. XD

It's THE most epic SB you've ever seen in your whole osu! life, right?

Well, due to nothing happening here for 3 days, and me with nothing to do, I got bored enough to make the SB move a bit

Sorry if thats a inconvience to anyway, but you have to re again

My bad.

Umm... I didn't see it move at all... It just seems like it censors longer...

Alright, that should fix it, i think i forgot to full submit

Thanks Blazevoir

This needs more stars!

Unless it's like... moving SUPER slow, I still don't see the SB moving

hmm, as long as you reed it it should work
I'll do another full submission when i get home (im actually at school atm )

I DID re it, but I still didn't notice a change...

Meh... I'll just wait till there's another update (again).

Wät is this SB re shiet? <.<

When I've finished ing this, I still get the "Update to latest version" message.

Do again a full submission and when you're done with it I'll take a look at this map

[General]
*Offset isn't on the downbeat. Use 2,096 instead to fix the metronome.
*Also, change the uninherited section at 00:56:558 to an inherited (red) one in all difficulties. This is because 00:55:635 is a two-beat measure, thus making the osu! metronome screw up.
*Perhaps -10 to each offset, too. (they felt a bit late)
*I see that 00114_shuffle1.jpg is being used to cover up certain bits at roughly 00:48:711, but (especially on the no-video version) it looks rather strange; with no fade-in/out and just a large/mostly-white rectangle. Adding some transparency to the logo (to cut out the white), enlargening it a bit, and fading it in/out would look MUCH better on both the video and no-video settings.

[Normal]
00:26:443 (2) - this is the only single-blue-tick note in the whole difficulty. Please change it to something else that's less confusing and more consistent with the rest of the map.
00:54:250 (1) - perhaps move back to the red tick and extend?
01:05:789 (5,1) - aren't stacked properly

[Hard]
00:26:789 (4) - overlap could be confusing... Besides, I'd rather see 2,3,4 as a repeating slider or something similar to show the triplet pattern that will be used throughout the song..
00:30:481 (4,5,6) - (nazi) spacing
00:46:173 - expected a note here
00:51:366 (5,2) - i dont like the overlap :/
01:11:097 (3,4,1) - ^
*Spacing was a bit linear, making the triplets hard to predict, but it wasn't too bad..

[Teras' Insane]
*Preview point is not consistent with the other difficulties. Please address this.

Full submition done, thanks osuplayer111

will look at what Derekku Chan has to say now then

roflninja wrote: 493d2i

Full submition done, thanks osuplayer111

will look at what Derekku Chan has to say now then

Blarg. Fix the preview point for me wiill you? xD
Can't bother to make such a tiny update and repost

Edit: nvm Fixing all in Derreku's mod.

Teras wrote: 246r3g

Derekku Chan wrote: 142k58

[General]
*Offset isn't on the downbeat. Use 2,096 instead to fix the metronome. Will this force me to delete notes....? -.-
*Also, change the uninherited section at 00:56:558 to an inherited (red) one in all difficulties. This is because 00:55:635 is a two-beat measure, thus making the osu! metronome screw up. With red you mean..A timing section? ...<.< To be honest.. I don't get what you mean by this.
*Perhaps -10 to each offset, too. (they felt a bit late) When I playe through my diff. The offset went between 0-1-2 all the time.. I don't think that is necessary.




[Teras' Insane]
*Preview point is not consistent with the other difficulties. Please address this.

It is. Look again..O.o

Waiting with my changes..Want a reply on this before I do anything..

You can place notes before the first offset, so you don't need to delete notes.

For the second timing section I mentioned, just disable the checkbox in the timing setup that says "inherit previous timing settings". This will reset the measure to fix the metronome.

Also, I forgot to mention to resnap notes after -10ing the two offsets.

Ive messed with the preview points, they are the same, its just wierd for some reason

Derekku Chan wrote: 142k58

[General]
*Offset isn't on the downbeat. Use 2,096 instead to fix the metronome. offset seems fine to me
*Also, change the uninherited section at 00:56:558 to an inherited (red) one in all difficulties. This is because 00:55:635 is a two-beat measure, thus making the osu! metronome screw up. I don't get this either
*Perhaps -10 to each offset, too. (they felt a bit late)again, seems fine to me
*I see that 00114_shuffle1.jpg is being used to cover up certain bits at roughly 00:48:711, but (especially on the no-video version) it looks rather strange; with no fade-in/out and just a large/mostly-white rectangle. Adding some transparency to the logo (to cut out the white), enlargening it a bit, and fading it in/out would look MUCH better on both the video and no-video settings. I rly don't wanna waste hours figuring that out =/

[Normal]
00:26:443 (2) - this is the only single-blue-tick note in the whole difficulty. Please change it to something else that's less confusing and more consistent with the rest of the map. seemed fine to me, but changed
00:54:250 (1) - perhaps move back to the red tick and extend? did that
01:05:789 (5,1) - aren't stacked properly fixed

[Hard]
00:26:789 (4) - overlap could be confusing... Besides, I'd rather see 2,3,4 as a repeating slider or something similar to show the triplet pattern that will be used throughout the song.. i kinda like that overlap
00:30:481 (4,5,6) - (nazi) spacing won't change
00:46:173 - expected a note here added
00:51:366 (5,2) - i dont like the overlap :/
01:11:097 (3,4,1) - ^
*Spacing was a bit linear, making the triplets hard to predict, but it wasn't too bad..

[Teras' Insane]
*Preview point is not consistent with the other difficulties. Please address this.

Kay. I fixed all of it.

: Yuria - You (TV Size) (roflninja) [Teras' Insane].osu

Ok, updated that, Thanks Teras

Thanks for the mod Derekku Chan

Wait, now I know why the beginning sounds too early. I was testing on Insane (which maps from the beginning), and then tried double checking on Hard (which starts quite a bit in). It seems like a third timing section (with a different offset where Normal/Hard begin) works much better. The three offsets that I get are:

2,106
26,086
56,547

My apologies for not double checking my timing (as I was a bit rushed when modding). Please adjust/add the offsets accordingly and resnap.

Also, Normal/Hard's final timing section (after the kiai) should just be inherited (green). For Insane, the second section that I originally asked to make uninherited (red) seems to have been added rather than changed, so the green one can be removed.

I hope this isn't too confusing, and no kudos needed for this since I'm just fixing my mistake. =x

bpm 130.000 ±0.004 about 11366 ~ 54836 , 56547 ~. no problem about this.

checking about 2106 - 11366 and 54836 - 56547


map are good for me.

---------

128.535 / 2106
131.00 / 5840
130.035 / 11366
130.060 / 22439
130.000 / 56547

try this

dvorak wrote: 1o3060

bpm 130.000 ±0.004 about 11366 ~ 54836 , 56547 ~. no problem about this.

checking about 2106 - 11366 and 54836 - 56547


map are good for me.

Those who Derreku said seems better to me. But I leave it to roflninja to decide which ones to use.

I'll take a look later, a little busy atm

Sorry if thats an inconvenience to anyone

Kay. Fixed all sections now. Thanks Derreku

: Yuria - You (TV Size) (roflninja) [Teras' Insane].osu

I agree with Derekku on the issue of that censor-logo thing, so I went ahead and cropped it a bit/added a border. (tried adding transparency to the entire logo, though some of the smaller details on the outside of the logo looked a bit out-of-place).

If you (or someone else) could find a higher quality/larger version of the logo, that would be pretty helpful.
Normal
It's fine.
Hard
Also fine.
Terra's Insane
The triplet (notes 4, 5, and 6) at 00:18:470 are a bit difficult to read, since the slider ends with a 1/4th note gap between it and note 4. Either add a note in this gap, or move the three notes so they aren't directly over the end of the slider.
Otherwise, no errors.

Anyway, either enlarge that version of the logo I gave you or find a higher quality version of it (ideally with transparency).

Will try to do then, thanks for modding

Tapdancingmetroid wrote: g5l6o

I agree with Derekku on the issue of that censor-logo thing, so I went ahead and cropped it a bit/added a border. (tried adding transparency to the entire logo, though some of the smaller details on the outside of the logo looked a bit out-of-place).

If you (or someone else) could find a higher quality/larger version of the logo, that would be pretty helpful.

Terra's Insane
The triplet (notes 4, 5, and 6) at 00:18:470 are a bit difficult to read, since the slider ends with a 1/4th note gap between it and note 4. Either add a note in this gap, or move the three notes so they aren't directly over the end of the slider.
Otherwise, no errors.

Added a note to fill the gap.

Anyway, either enlarge that version of the logo I gave you or find a higher quality version of it (ideally with transparency).

: Yuria - You (TV Size) (roflninja) [Teras' Insane].osu

Updated, thanks once again Teras

The path of the SB is wrong which means the SB didn't work and I still see nipples


It should be something like


Reapply the SB from the correct location~

Updated, Thanks again Mafiamaster

Now that that's out of the way, you have 3 unnecessary files in your folder. Make sure you do a full submit after you've deleted unused files!

Updated again, i couldn't what picture it was i used

Here's another bubble (again) xD

Bah. I'll leave one more kudosu star here. Gief BATs D:

Hitsounds are a bit random in Normal+Hard because you follow too much vocals
Since it`s bubbled so i just leave my comment here
ranked

Awesome skin <3

Grats roflninja

Long 3 month run

Thanks to anyone who helped me
Teras for the Dif
Astom for getting this going after 2 months of nothing

roflninja wrote: 493d2i

Long 3 month run

Thanks to anyone who helped me
Teras for the Dif
Astom for getting this going after 2 months of nothing

Oh~ No problem
Good to see this song ranked and good luck in u next song ^^

Cya

Sounds to me like this needs +14 added to the offset. Can anyone confirm?

This map is bad.