Hai here comes your mod~

[Overall]
Everythings all fine and dandy, except for the fact that you don't have a difficulty under 3 stars. Someone ate your easy difficulty.

[Normal]
Fine.

[Hard]
Mmmh... This is okay.

[Teras' Insane]
Teras, wasn't I just talking about this difficulty to you the other day?
I shall post what I said about this difficulty.
I don't particularly like your HP Drain, feel like it needs to be lowered one tick.
OD is fine, I like where it is right now.
00:54:596 (7) - That cursed note, I STILL feel like it should be stacked with 5,6. I know you're going to say no though.

You need an easy.
*throws a star at you*
There you go~

I_Tatsuo_I wrote: 724t1g

Hai here comes your mod~

[Overall]
Everythings all fine and dandy, except for the fact that you don't have a difficulty under 3 stars. Someone ate your easy difficulty. Normal has 2.81 stars. No need for an easier diff.

[Normal]
Fine.

[Hard]
Mmmh... This is okay.

[Teras' Insane]
Teras, wasn't I just talking about this difficulty to you the other day?
I shall post what I said about this difficulty.
I don't particularly like your HP Drain, feel like it needs to be lowered one tick.
OD is fine, I like where it is right now.
00:54:596 (7) - That cursed note, I STILL feel like it should be stacked with 5,6. I know you're going to say no though. It will still be a no xD

You need an easy.
*throws a star at you*
There you go~

Requested by Teras

[Tags]
Just curious, does Navel have anything to do with this map? If not, remove it.

[All difficulites]
I would say that you should only use claps every second white tick for the most part, The claps placement feels pretty odd right now and i think that fits the song the best.

[Normal]

00:26:097 (1,2,3) - Why not make this the same rhythm as 00:33:250 (1,2,3,4,5)
00:42:135 (4) - Okey, I know this follows the vocals but I think moving this 1/4 later makes it far more fun and playable. (Especial for being a Normal)
00:45:827 (5) - ^
00:49:520 (4) - ^
01:13:520 (6) - ^
01:17:212 (6) - ^

[Hard]
00:54:942 (1) - Add finish on this spinner


[Teras]
Not that found of the high HP drain but it might be just me.
Wish you added a bit more hitsounds, mainly in the beginning
00:43:981 (6,7) - Move back 1/4 on the time line.

*star*

Xgor wrote: 3x2l1w

[Teras]
Not that found of the high HP drain but it might be just me. It's now you and I_Tatsuo_I.
Wish you added a bit more hitsounds, mainly in the beginning I don't think I need more hitsounds. <.<
00:43:981 (6,7) - Move back 1/4 on the time line. Nah, it sounds horrible to me

Nothing changed. Thanks for your mod though

*star*

[Tags]
Just curious, does Navel have anything to do with this map? If not, remove it.Navel is the producer/company who made the h-game shuffle! was based off

[All difficulites]
I would say that you should only use claps every second white tick for the most part, The claps placement feels pretty odd right now and i think that fits the song the best.will leave this how it is for now, will take a look later

[Normal]

00:26:097 (1,2,3) - Why not make this the same rhythm as 00:33:250 (1,2,3,4,5) done
00:42:135 (4) - Okey, I know this follows the vocals but I think moving this 1/4 later makes it far more fun and playable. (Especial for being a Normal)^
00:45:827 (5) - ^ ^
00:49:520 (4) - ^ ^
01:13:520 (6) - ^ ^
01:17:212 (6) - ^ ^

[Hard]
00:54:942 (1) - Add finish on this spinner done

Hi hi!!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!

~Normal~
00:42:250 (4) - Fix Spacing.
01:03:365 (6) - Move 1/4 later (white tick) and New Combo.

~Hard~
00:51:943 (2) - Extend to the white tick, it sounds better imo.

~Tera's Insane~
- Just a little thing, Tags in here are "Teras Navel" when in the rest of diffs are "Navel Teras". Not a big deal but it might affect online tags

00:18:942 (7) - Fix Spacing.

Nice map :3 *star*

Beuchi-chan wrote: 1y1f14

~Tera's Insane~
- Just a little thing, Tags in here are "Teras Navel" when in the rest of diffs are "Navel Teras". Not a big deal but it might affect online tags

00:18:942 (7) - Fix Spacing.

Fixed both ;-)

Nice map :3 *star*

: Yuria - You (TV Size) (roflninja) [Teras' Insane].osu

'Aight then~

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these

1. Timing seems about right

[NORMAL]

The layout of the beats are a little dull, since most of the beats are all in straight lines and on right angles, There isn't anything technically wrong though. You could consider experimenting more with patterns that you put your beats in in your next map. It'll make it much more interesting.

[HARD]

Looks much more interesting than Normal, which is a good sign.

01:09:250 (6) - Perhaps you could move this 1/4 forward? (and make it 1/4 shorter if you do this). It follow the lyrics better that way to me.

[TERA'S INSANE]

00:54:596 (8) - Perhaps you could stack this on (7) to make a 3 beat stack?. It seems more intuitive that way.

Apart from the seemingly random jumps you've put in (like at 01:16:635 or 00:03:250), I quite like this map. The jumps themselves aren't that bad anyway, so the map stays fun. Nice work

Overall, its a pretty nice mapset. You could probably try experimenting with the layout of your beats a bit more in your next map. For a first map, you did a good job.

Starred

Doomsday93 wrote: 153q4a

[TERA'S INSANE]

00:54:596 (8) - Perhaps you could stack this on (7) to make a 3 beat stack?. It seems more intuitive that way. Kay, fixed it then.

Apart from the seemingly random jumps you've put in (like at 01:16:635 or 00:03:250), I quite like this map. The jumps themselves aren't that bad anyway, so the map stays fun. Nice work I like those random jumps

Starred

: Yuria - You (TV Size) (roflninja) [Teras' Insane].osu

Doomsday93 wrote: 153q4a

'Aight then~

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these

1. Timing seems about right

[NORMAL]

The layout of the beats are a little dull, since most of the beats are all in straight lines and on right angles, There isn't anything technically wrong though. You could consider experimenting more with patterns that you put your beats in in your next map. It'll make it much more interesting. will try next time, this is my first map so its kinda =/

[HARD]

Looks much more interesting than Normal, which is a good sign.

01:09:250 (6) - Perhaps you could move this 1/4 forward? (and make it 1/4 shorter if you do this). It follow the lyrics better that way to me.agree with you there

Thanks for the mod

sorry, i've become a bit lazy over the past few days orz

will mod in the weekend. star for now!

(Assuming I didn't see naked girls holding hands in the video)
Bubbled!

Hi. All suggestion

[Overall]
Change colours of circle like these 4
R(238) G(17) B(117)
R(128) G(64) B(64)
R(179) G(132) B(170)
R(255) G(150) B(0)
It will be more suitable for girls on BG

[Normal, Hard]
Actually, its clap sounds are somewhat annoying. I suggest all of claps should be changed to whistle except kiai time. and use normal hitsounds in kiai time. of course, you should control the volume when use it.

[Teras' Insane]
00:04:865 (3) - add whistle
00:07:519 (3) - ^
00:08:442 (2) - ^
00:18:365 - add circle to emphasize the beginning of song.
01:18:250 (1,2,3,4,5) - reverse or do something. similar to 01:14:558
00:26:211~00:40:058 - volume is too low

yehl wrote: 26xt

[Teras' Insane]
00:04:865 (3) - add whistle
00:07:519 (3) - ^
00:08:442 (2) - ^
00:18:365 - add circle to emphasize the beginning of song.
01:18:250 (1,2,3,4,5) - reverse or do something. similar to 01:14:558
00:26:211~00:40:058 - volume is too low

No to all. I prefer how it is now

Bubbled, so I better skip lol

Good luck!

Oh, Bubbled.

my mod

Nice map~
star & gl

banvi wrote: 4q3o2v

Oh, Bubbled.

my mod

00:27:481 (4) 1 grid down? (bacause spacing a bit far)
00:54:250 (5) 1 grid left?(^)
00:58:404 (5) 1 grid up?(^)
01:08:096 (3) 1 grid right?
01:16:173 (4) 1 grid up?

I don't like Nazi mods. COme up with something else if you want me to change anything <.<

Nice map~
star & gl

Hmm...everything is pretty solid in this map, methinks~

Except for one aspect...Er...in the video, there's some crazy nipple footage there... I think it would be best if you can find some way to remove it. I tried to remove it by adding a white overlay via video, but all that did was up the size by a giant amount. XD

But I guess you can add a white overlay on that part using SB a la http://osu-ppy-sh.zoneani.me/s/10359 . :S

Sorry about being picky on this.

Starrodkirby86 wrote: 6pu1b

Hmm...everything is pretty solid in this map, methinks~

Except for one aspect...Er...in the video, there's some crazy nipple footage there... I think it would be best if you can find some way to remove it. I tried to remove it by adding a white overlay via video, but all that did was up the size by a giant amount. XD

But I guess you can add a white overlay on that part using SB a la http://osu-ppy-sh.zoneani.me/s/10359 . :S

Sorry about being picky on this.

Was only a matter of time until someone made me fix that
should be fine now, hope the SB works

I laughed my head off when I saw the SB. XD

Teras wrote: 246r3g

I laughed my head off when I saw the SB. XD

It's THE most epic SB you've ever seen in your whole osu! life, right?

Well, due to nothing happening here for 3 days, and me with nothing to do, I got bored enough to make the SB move a bit

Sorry if thats a inconvience to anyway, but you have to re again

My bad.

Umm... I didn't see it move at all... It just seems like it censors longer...

Alright, that should fix it, i think i forgot to full submit

Thanks Blazevoir

This needs more stars!

Unless it's like... moving SUPER slow, I still don't see the SB moving

hmm, as long as you reed it it should work
I'll do another full submission when i get home (im actually at school atm )

I DID re it, but I still didn't notice a change...

Meh... I'll just wait till there's another update (again).

Wät is this SB re shiet? <.<

When I've finished ing this, I still get the "Update to latest version" message.

Do again a full submission and when you're done with it I'll take a look at this map

[General]
*Offset isn't on the downbeat. Use 2,096 instead to fix the metronome.
*Also, change the uninherited section at 00:56:558 to an inherited (red) one in all difficulties. This is because 00:55:635 is a two-beat measure, thus making the osu! metronome screw up.
*Perhaps -10 to each offset, too. (they felt a bit late)
*I see that 00114_shuffle1.jpg is being used to cover up certain bits at roughly 00:48:711, but (especially on the no-video version) it looks rather strange; with no fade-in/out and just a large/mostly-white rectangle. Adding some transparency to the logo (to cut out the white), enlargening it a bit, and fading it in/out would look MUCH better on both the video and no-video settings.

[Normal]
00:26:443 (2) - this is the only single-blue-tick note in the whole difficulty. Please change it to something else that's less confusing and more consistent with the rest of the map.
00:54:250 (1) - perhaps move back to the red tick and extend?
01:05:789 (5,1) - aren't stacked properly

[Hard]
00:26:789 (4) - overlap could be confusing... Besides, I'd rather see 2,3,4 as a repeating slider or something similar to show the triplet pattern that will be used throughout the song..
00:30:481 (4,5,6) - (nazi) spacing
00:46:173 - expected a note here
00:51:366 (5,2) - i dont like the overlap :/
01:11:097 (3,4,1) - ^
*Spacing was a bit linear, making the triplets hard to predict, but it wasn't too bad..

[Teras' Insane]
*Preview point is not consistent with the other difficulties. Please address this.

Full submition done, thanks osuplayer111

will look at what Derekku Chan has to say now then

roflninja wrote: 493d2i

Full submition done, thanks osuplayer111

will look at what Derekku Chan has to say now then

Blarg. Fix the preview point for me wiill you? xD
Can't bother to make such a tiny update and repost

Edit: nvm Fixing all in Derreku's mod.

Teras wrote: 246r3g

Derekku Chan wrote: 142k58

[General]
*Offset isn't on the downbeat. Use 2,096 instead to fix the metronome. Will this force me to delete notes....? -.-
*Also, change the uninherited section at 00:56:558 to an inherited (red) one in all difficulties. This is because 00:55:635 is a two-beat measure, thus making the osu! metronome screw up. With red you mean..A timing section? ...<.< To be honest.. I don't get what you mean by this.
*Perhaps -10 to each offset, too. (they felt a bit late) When I playe through my diff. The offset went between 0-1-2 all the time.. I don't think that is necessary.




[Teras' Insane]
*Preview point is not consistent with the other difficulties. Please address this.

It is. Look again..O.o

Waiting with my changes..Want a reply on this before I do anything..

You can place notes before the first offset, so you don't need to delete notes.

For the second timing section I mentioned, just disable the checkbox in the timing setup that says "inherit previous timing settings". This will reset the measure to fix the metronome.

Also, I forgot to mention to resnap notes after -10ing the two offsets.

Ive messed with the preview points, they are the same, its just wierd for some reason

Derekku Chan wrote: 142k58

[General]
*Offset isn't on the downbeat. Use 2,096 instead to fix the metronome. offset seems fine to me
*Also, change the uninherited section at 00:56:558 to an inherited (red) one in all difficulties. This is because 00:55:635 is a two-beat measure, thus making the osu! metronome screw up. I don't get this either
*Perhaps -10 to each offset, too. (they felt a bit late)again, seems fine to me
*I see that 00114_shuffle1.jpg is being used to cover up certain bits at roughly 00:48:711, but (especially on the no-video version) it looks rather strange; with no fade-in/out and just a large/mostly-white rectangle. Adding some transparency to the logo (to cut out the white), enlargening it a bit, and fading it in/out would look MUCH better on both the video and no-video settings. I rly don't wanna waste hours figuring that out =/

[Normal]
00:26:443 (2) - this is the only single-blue-tick note in the whole difficulty. Please change it to something else that's less confusing and more consistent with the rest of the map. seemed fine to me, but changed
00:54:250 (1) - perhaps move back to the red tick and extend? did that
01:05:789 (5,1) - aren't stacked properly fixed

[Hard]
00:26:789 (4) - overlap could be confusing... Besides, I'd rather see 2,3,4 as a repeating slider or something similar to show the triplet pattern that will be used throughout the song.. i kinda like that overlap
00:30:481 (4,5,6) - (nazi) spacing won't change
00:46:173 - expected a note here added
00:51:366 (5,2) - i dont like the overlap :/
01:11:097 (3,4,1) - ^
*Spacing was a bit linear, making the triplets hard to predict, but it wasn't too bad..

[Teras' Insane]
*Preview point is not consistent with the other difficulties. Please address this.

Kay. I fixed all of it.

: Yuria - You (TV Size) (roflninja) [Teras' Insane].osu

Ok, updated that, Thanks Teras

Thanks for the mod Derekku Chan

Wait, now I know why the beginning sounds too early. I was testing on Insane (which maps from the beginning), and then tried double checking on Hard (which starts quite a bit in). It seems like a third timing section (with a different offset where Normal/Hard begin) works much better. The three offsets that I get are:

2,106
26,086
56,547

My apologies for not double checking my timing (as I was a bit rushed when modding). Please adjust/add the offsets accordingly and resnap.

Also, Normal/Hard's final timing section (after the kiai) should just be inherited (green). For Insane, the second section that I originally asked to make uninherited (red) seems to have been added rather than changed, so the green one can be removed.

I hope this isn't too confusing, and no kudos needed for this since I'm just fixing my mistake. =x

bpm 130.000 ±0.004 about 11366 ~ 54836 , 56547 ~. no problem about this.

checking about 2106 - 11366 and 54836 - 56547


map are good for me.

---------

128.535 / 2106
131.00 / 5840
130.035 / 11366
130.060 / 22439
130.000 / 56547

try this

dvorak wrote: 1o3060

bpm 130.000 ±0.004 about 11366 ~ 54836 , 56547 ~. no problem about this.

checking about 2106 - 11366 and 54836 - 56547


map are good for me.

Those who Derreku said seems better to me. But I leave it to roflninja to decide which ones to use.

I'll take a look later, a little busy atm

Sorry if thats an inconvenience to anyone

Kay. Fixed all sections now. Thanks Derreku

: Yuria - You (TV Size) (roflninja) [Teras' Insane].osu

I agree with Derekku on the issue of that censor-logo thing, so I went ahead and cropped it a bit/added a border. (tried adding transparency to the entire logo, though some of the smaller details on the outside of the logo looked a bit out-of-place).

If you (or someone else) could find a higher quality/larger version of the logo, that would be pretty helpful.
Normal
It's fine.
Hard
Also fine.
Terra's Insane
The triplet (notes 4, 5, and 6) at 00:18:470 are a bit difficult to read, since the slider ends with a 1/4th note gap between it and note 4. Either add a note in this gap, or move the three notes so they aren't directly over the end of the slider.
Otherwise, no errors.

Anyway, either enlarge that version of the logo I gave you or find a higher quality version of it (ideally with transparency).

Will try to do then, thanks for modding

Tapdancingmetroid wrote: g5l6o

I agree with Derekku on the issue of that censor-logo thing, so I went ahead and cropped it a bit/added a border. (tried adding transparency to the entire logo, though some of the smaller details on the outside of the logo looked a bit out-of-place).

If you (or someone else) could find a higher quality/larger version of the logo, that would be pretty helpful.

Terra's Insane
The triplet (notes 4, 5, and 6) at 00:18:470 are a bit difficult to read, since the slider ends with a 1/4th note gap between it and note 4. Either add a note in this gap, or move the three notes so they aren't directly over the end of the slider.
Otherwise, no errors.

Added a note to fill the gap.

Anyway, either enlarge that version of the logo I gave you or find a higher quality version of it (ideally with transparency).

: Yuria - You (TV Size) (roflninja) [Teras' Insane].osu

Updated, thanks once again Teras

The path of the SB is wrong which means the SB didn't work and I still see nipples


It should be something like


Reapply the SB from the correct location~

Updated, Thanks again Mafiamaster

Now that that's out of the way, you have 3 unnecessary files in your folder. Make sure you do a full submit after you've deleted unused files!

Updated again, i couldn't what picture it was i used

Here's another bubble (again) xD

Bah. I'll leave one more kudosu star here. Gief BATs D:

Hitsounds are a bit random in Normal+Hard because you follow too much vocals
Since it`s bubbled so i just leave my comment here
ranked

Awesome skin <3

Grats roflninja

Long 3 month run

Thanks to anyone who helped me
Teras for the Dif
Astom for getting this going after 2 months of nothing

roflninja wrote: 493d2i

Long 3 month run

Thanks to anyone who helped me
Teras for the Dif
Astom for getting this going after 2 months of nothing

Oh~ No problem
Good to see this song ranked and good luck in u next song ^^

Cya

Sounds to me like this needs +14 added to the offset. Can anyone confirm?

This map is bad.